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Pehli Script: Shuruat Aur Mulaqat

SCENE 1: BHAI KI MAUT

(Ek sunsaan gali. Raat ka samay. Arjun ka bhai, AMIT, zameen par gira hua hai. SHERA uske paas aata hai.)

SHERA: Ab bolo, Rana kahan hai? Uska pata ab bhi nahi doge?

AMIT: (mushkil se bolta hai) Main... tumhe uske baare mein kuchh nahi bataunga.

SHERA: (zor se) Tum jaise chote-mote log humse panga nahi lete! Aaj ke baad koi humare raaste mein nahi aayega!

(Shera apne haath uthata hai. Uski aankhon mein gussa hai.)

SHERA: (Bunty se) Khatam karo iska khel.

(Camera Amit ke chehre par focus karta hai. Screen kaali ho jati hai, aur goli chalne ki awaaz sunai deti hai.)

SCENE 2: BADLE KA FAISLA

(Arjun ka ghar. Subah ka samay. Arjun phone par baat kar raha hai. Uska chehra sunn hai. RAJ, SAMEER, aur DEEPAK uske paas aate hain.)

SAMEER: Bhai, kya hua? Bol!

(Arjun tezi se mudta hai. Uski aankhon mein laal rang dikhta hai.)

ARJUN: (gusse se) Shera... usne mere bhai ko maar diya. Woh sochta hai ki woh bach jayega? Nahi! Main usse zinda nahi chhodunga!

DEEPAK: Bhai, wo bahut khatarnak aadmi hai.

ARJUN: (Deepak ki taraf dekhte hue) Tabhi toh hum use marne se pehle uski takat ko khatam karenge. Raj, uske har ek location ka pata lagao. Deepak, uske saare dhandhon ki khabar lao. Sameer, tum mere saath rahoge. Aaj ke baad, hum sirf ek hi cheez ke liye kaam karenge... badle ke liye!

(Screen kaale rang mein dhal jaati hai.)

SCENE 3: RANA SE MULAQAT

(Ek purani warehouse. Raat ka samay. ARJUN aur SAMEER darwaze par khade hain. Andar se ROHIT bahar aata hai.)

ROHIT: Kaun ho tum log?

ARJUN: Mera naam Arjun hai. Mujhe Rana se milna hai.

(Rohit unhe andar aane deta hai. RANA apni kursi par baitha hai.)

RANA: Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Tum jaiso ko main aam taur par apne ilake mein nahi aane deta.

ARJUN: Mujhe tumhari madat chahiye. Hum dono ka dushman ek hi hai, Shera.

RANA: (dheere se haskar) Tum usse ladna chahte ho? Tumhe lagta hai ki tum usko hara sakte ho?

ARJUN: Par main akela nahi hoon. Aur tum bhi nahi ho. Hum dono milkar usse hara sakte hain.

RANA: Toh tum kya chahte ho?

ARJUN: Badla. Tumhe apna ilaka wapas milega, aur mujhe mere bhai ki maut ka badla.

RANA: (aahista se) Agar hum mile, toh uske liye ek hi shart hai. Ladai sirf hamare tarike se hogi.

ARJUN: (has kar) Mujhe manzoor hai.

(Dono haath milate hain. Dono ke chehre par ek nayi aur khatarnak muskaan aati hai.)

Doosri Script: Pehla Hamla Aur Ant

SCENE 4: TAQDEER KI JUNG

(Ek chhota sa factory. Raat ka samay. Arjun aur Sameer chhipe hue hain. Raj phone par unse baat kar raha hai.)

RAJ (PHONE PAR): Location confirm hai bhai. Shera ke do bade truck yahan se nikalne wale hain.

ARJUN: (Sameer se aahista se) Ready rehna, hume unhe rokna hai.

(Rana aur Rohit ek taraf se factory ke andar aate hain. Rana shotgun se darwaze ko tod deta hai. Alarm bajne lagta hai.)

RANA: Yahi toh hum chahte hain. Ab Shera ke aane ka intezar karte hain.

(Andar se goonde nikalte hain. Sameer unse ladne lagta hai, aur Arjun dur se use bachata hai. Dono milkar goondo ko harate hain.)

ARJUN: (Rana se) Yeh humara pehla mission hai. Hum isse haath se jaane nahi de sakte.

SCENE 5: DHOKHA AUR JAAL

(Shera ka gupt office. Din ka samay. Shera gusse mein baitha hai.)

SHERA: Yeh kaise ho sakta hai? Rana aur woh ladka, milkar hamare trucks ko kaise rok sakte hain?

RAVI: (darrte hue) Boss, maine suna hai ki woh dono ab saath hain.

SHERA: (zor se) Woh donon? Akele Rana ko toh maine kab ka khatam kar diya hota.

BUNTY: Boss, hum unhe pakadne ka ek plan banate hain.

(Shera apne dimag mein ek plan banata hai. Uska chehra bilkul shaant ho jata hai.)

SHERA: Ab hum unhe ek aisi jagah bulayenge jahan se woh zinda wapas nahi ja payenge.

SCENE 6: BADLE KA ANTT (CLIMAX)

(Ek bada, purana godown. Raat ka samay. Arjun aur Rana andar aate hain.)

SHERA: (unhe dekhkar) Toh, aakhirkar tum aa hi gaye. Mujhe laga tha ki tum dar jaoge.

ARJUN: Hum darne walo mein se nahi hain. Tumhe jo karna hai, kar lo. Hum bhi taiyaar hain.

(Achanak godown ki lights band ho jati hain aur goli chalne ki awaaz aati hai.)

RANA: (chilakar) Yahi hai uska jaal!

(Andhere mein ladai shuru ho jati hai. Aakhir mein, Rana aur Arjun milkar Shera ko pakad lete hain.)

ARJUN: (Shera ke paas aata hai) Tumne socha tha ki tumne mere bhai ko maar diya toh tum jeet gaye. Par tum galat the. Badle ki aag kabhi shant nahi hoti.

(Arjun Shera ko dekhkar muskurata hai. Uski aankhon mein jeet hai. Screen kaali ho jati hai.)

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