You can always optimize the sentences in a prompt to enhance precision and clarity.
For instance:
Removing small talk such as “please”
Being more direct: "Given this information" can be replaced by "Task : "
Being very specific about the desired output format.
But i'd also suggest to add an example of input / ouput at the end of your prompt.
Prompt tend to work better when structured like this:
General purpose and what task should be performed
Guidelines (including output format)
Context
Examples